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The Travel To The New Land

            Once upon a time there was a ship traveling to the new land. The ship had rockets for the engine and the ship was a mile long.  The people on this ship were poor and no one on this ship had more than fifty dollars.  All the people only had the clothes on the backs. . . these times were very bad. There were now thousands of pirate

s in the sea and on land

 and most of the pirates were in America.  America is owned by the pirates. This ship was the only ship to take all the poor people from America to the new land. The way to the new land was covered by pirates and if that is not enough the weather would change to burning hot to freezing cold. People on the ship thought that they would die before they saw the new land. The people knew there were only five M-16(riffles) and ten 9-m.m.(pistol) and twenty swords.

            There was one man who was not afraid that pirates might attack or he would die by the heat or the cold. His name was David Miller. He was traveling alone and he had forty three dollars and pants, shirt, jacket, and shoes.

This is his story:

            David was on deck walking around in the freezing cold when he saw this woman walking on deck also with only pants, and a small ragged shirt. She did not have shoes or a jacket and from what David could see she had no money. He walked up to her and he gave her his jacket and asked, “what are you doing walking up here in that.” She said she sold her jacket and shoes for food and inside the ship were to many diseases.  David nodd

ed and said that makes good sense in away and then said, “ You may use my jacket end until it gets warm again. He asked, “ Are you hung

ry?”  She said, “ Very much.”   He pulled out a sandwich and gave it to her. David asked, “What’s your name?”  She answered him and said Kate Edwards and right when she sa

id her name there was a big nudge on the ship. Then they heard a voice yelling, “pirates!”  repeatedly until he was shot in the back of the head by a pirate.  David told Kate to go to the back of the boat and wait for him there. She ran to the back while he ran straight towards the pirates.  He closed lined one pirate and took his pistol and sword and stabbed that pirate with its own sword. Then he raced off to the rest of the pirates. He started to slice and dice them.  He ducked under one pirates sword and did a spin kick and the pirate went flying. David was taking on five pirates in a row. He took a quick glance toward Kate and saw a pirate walking toward her and so he took the pistol and fired.  It hit him right in the back of the neck. Then right in time he looked in front of him and saw a pirate swinging a sword right at him, he barely jumped back and dodge the sword. Then shot him in the chest. The rest of the pirates now were turning around and started to retreat because the crew just came o

ut of the armory with their M-16s and swords and 9 m.m.  

David raced to the pirates ship and jumped on and did a spin kick to a pirate and he kept fighting. Then he noticed that the ship was leaving so 

he ran to the driver and shot him right between the eyes and he turned the ship back to the either ship and then kept fighting he knottiest that there was a sniper behind him with a knife so he threw his sword into him and hekep

t fighting with only a empty pistol for only a while and then he picked up two swords and killed the rest of the pirates on the ship. So there were still pirates on the either ships so he got back on bored of the either ship and ran to Kate and when he got there, there was a pirate holding up and he was about to stab her but David threw his sword into to pirates back. Then Kate ran to him and they hugged each other then they were walking back to the pirates ship and Kate asked were did you learn to fight like that and David said that him and his brother uses to use sticks but his brother 

was killed by pirates and so he never stopped trying to get better so he could kill all the pirates. David and Kate jumped on to the pirates ship and looked in there cargo and saw gold and silver so they gave half of it to the rest of the people on the ship. Then Kate and David lived happily ever after. 

The END

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